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-\indent In my recent role as a Researcher ML Engineer at the \schoolName, I conducted in-depth data collection, diagnosis and analysis to identify key correlations in latency and network bandwidth.
-This experience in real-time environments helped me develop a solid foundation for programming, deploying and optimzing systems under various operational conditions.
-My prior work as a Software Developer on an Assistive Robotic Feeding System in ROS2 required on-the-spot troubleshooting of hardware-software integration issues, as well as coordinating with microcontrollers and sensors (ESP32, PIR) in a Smart Door application, to deliver a stable automated experience.
-Additionally, my experience as an IT Analyst entailed reading electrical schematics, configuring rirewalls, and modernizing network infrastructure-further sharpening my problem-solving abilities.\\
+\indent In my recent role as a Researcher ML Engineer at \schoolName, I conducted in-depth data collection, diagnosis, and analysis to identify key correlations in latency and network bandwidth. 
+This experience in real-time environments helped me develop a strong foundation for programming, deploying, and optimizing systems under various operational conditions.\\
 
-Beyond my professional roles, I also maintain a personal home lab where I manage automations for lighting, thermostats, and security—deepening my understanding of real-time data exchange, hardware integration, and troubleshooting.
-Throughout these projects, I leveraged my skills in C/C++, Python, Rust, and Java, along with Ladder Logic (PLC) knowledge, to integrate hardware and software in real-time systems. 
-I also appreciate the importance of robust design documentation and functional specifications, having written and followed them closely for various edge-cloud and robotics solutions. 
-My familiarity with IT/networking, databases, and version control (Git) further positions me to support Brock Solutions’ industrial automation projects from design through commissioning.\\
+My prior work as a Software Developer on an Assistive Robotic Feeding System in ROS2 required on-the-spot troubleshooting of hardware-software integration issues. 
+Additionally, I worked on a Smart Door application, integrating microcontrollers and sensors (ESP32, PIR) to deliver a stable, automated experience. 
+My experience as an IT Analyst further refined my problem-solving abilities by involving me in reading electrical schematics, configuring firewalls, and modernizing network infrastructure.\\
 
-I also welcome the travel requirement of up to 40\% for on-site installations and system commissioning, as I thrive on hands-on involvement to make sure solutions run smoothly in real-world production. My background has prepared me to excel in roles requiring both technical depth and adaptability.\\
+Beyond my professional roles, I actively explore industrial automation and embedded systems in my personal projects. 
+I have self-educated in using the ESP32 to develop a low-cost, 32-bit PLC, programming it with OpenPLC to enhance my understanding of real-time control systems. 
+Additionally, I manage a home lab where I automate lighting, thermostats, and security—deepening my experience in real-time data exchange, hardware integration, and troubleshooting.
+Throughout these projects, I have leveraged my expertise in C/C++, Python, Rust, and Java, along with Ladder Logic (PLC) knowledge, to integrate hardware and software in real-time systems. 
+I also understand the importance of robust design documentation and functional specifications, having written and followed them closely for various edge-cloud and robotics solutions. 
+My familiarity with IT/networking, databases, and version control (Git) further positions me to contribute effectively to Brock Solutions’ industrial automation projects from design through commissioning.\\
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+I also welcome the travel requirement of up to 40\% for on-site installations and system commissioning, as I thrive on hands-on involvement to ensure solutions run smoothly in real-world production. 
+My background has prepared me to excel in roles that demand both technical depth and adaptability.\\
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